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I wrote your name down
On a small peice of paper
Then I crumpled it up
And shoved it in my pocket.
No one would know you're with me
I took out the paper
Awhile after that
Your name still there
I took my pen, and scratched it out
No one could know you're with me
I started to cry
Tears dropping on that paper
And I ripped it up.
I threw it on the ground
And walked a way
I never knew you're with me
Years after that day
On a small peice of paper
I wrote down three letters
And I would show it around now
Because I know you're always with me
On a small peice of paper
Then I crumpled it up
And shoved it in my pocket.
No one would know you're with me
I took out the paper
Awhile after that
Your name still there
I took my pen, and scratched it out
No one could know you're with me
I started to cry
Tears dropping on that paper
And I ripped it up.
I threw it on the ground
And walked a way
I never knew you're with me
Years after that day
On a small peice of paper
I wrote down three letters
And I would show it around now
Because I know you're always with me
This started as something completly different
it actualy started of being about a girl
hah.
it actualy started of being about a girl
hah.
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I think this is unique in its own manner. It is both personal and something that the reader can relate to. You certainly gave it an interesting meaning at the end, which was nice.
I think this was a typo:
"On a small peice of paper"
The word "piece" is spelled wrong (the letter i goes before e).
Overall, this was a great poem. I enjoyed it! Keep up the great writing
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-gl hf
~Xbx
I think this was a typo:
"On a small peice of paper"
The word "piece" is spelled wrong (the letter i goes before e).
Overall, this was a great poem. I enjoyed it! Keep up the great writing
.-gl hf
~Xbx